Chapter One: First Editions
This is still a very early draft of The Analog Collapse, and Chapter One is far from complete. I wanted to share a small piece of the project anyway to get honest feedback while the story is still evolving. If you have thoughts, theories, criticisms, ideas, or even small details that felt interesting or out of place, I’d genuinely like to hear them. One of the most enjoyable parts of writing science fiction is seeing what readers notice — especially when reality, memory, and history start to blur together a little. Feel free to leave a comment and tell me what you think so far. - Niel Oscar